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thumperbunny5
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 Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 6:27 pm |
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whatcha think. My friends and I are creating a comic about us. this is me. Be harsh. |
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 6:35 pm |
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Alright, ill be harsh.
First of all i dont understand what's on the picture? Some guy on the bench i see that, but where that shadow comes from i dont see (i hope that isnt his own shadow). Plus i dont see the head, especially the face, where is it? |
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thumperbunny5
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 6:43 pm |
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The face is a mask. He is a superhero after all. And no the shadow is someone else. That mysterous man who just shot me.  does anyone else have a problem seeing the head and mask....? |
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roundeye
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 7:19 pm |
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| mask? like a skull with lipstick and bunny ears with a flower on his head? honestly thats what i see. |
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roundeye
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 7:21 pm |
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| is it a clown? i dont understand his hand either... |
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thumperbunny5
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| Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 5:27 am |
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| its a bunny guy... kinda clownish i guess. and he is wearing mittens.. and yes i can draw hands. I wanted him with mittens. does the hair really look that bad? |
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mucha
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| Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 7:07 am |
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| it would be a cool pic if u were going for a abstract expresionist style - sorry i cant see what it is either. |
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MoleculeMan
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| Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 8:45 am |
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yeah, as most people are saying, the image is really hard to understand visually (and seeing how this is prolly for a comic thats bad :/) You might want to just scrap the whole picture and make a new one, or at the least add some more detail. Also on the coloring, you should highlight the mittens more since it seems like there is this huge spotlight coming from behind the shadow. If that is the case there should be a lot of contrast(?), with one side of bunnyman being brightly lit and the other side being really dark.
Jake |
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thumperbunny5
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| Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2002 6:54 pm |
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ok this is the newer version... be a little less harsh this time. i am usually a designer and not so much a painter. :P |
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gArGOyLe^
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| Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2002 7:28 pm |
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| i dont see it.. theres an X there |
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thumperbunny5
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