Sijun Forums :: View topic - The AH

Sniper_#1 · Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 2:25 pm

Im a new comer to this place and i thought that i could show off my work that ive done..

First we have the "AH comic".. all of my Quake3 clan members made in to cartoonic characters..

http://www.gamenet.nu/sexy/pics/the_ah.JPG

Then ive made a selfportrait at school..
http://www.gamenet.nu/sexy/pics/MVC-002F.JPG

What do you think?

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Novacaptain · Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 7:45 pm

hello, welcome to the forum.

The "group picture" shows that you need to work on anatomy (don't we all) quite a bit. Studying proportions will make it better too. The characters are obviously supposed to be "cartoony" but some general proportions and anatomy are still a good thing to keep in mind before you exaggerate them for comic effect.

The light/shadow on it is very simple and confusing, making all the characters look flat.

The self-portrait looks nicer; more expressive. Again the light seems off and there are anatomical mistakes.

I like the self portrait more than the other picture.

Wthat's with the floating quake 3 logo?

bld · Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 8:25 pm

Damn i was gonna do a comic of my Quake clan too...