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lookitsfrank
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 Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 7:33 pm |
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ok. I'm done with this guy. Frankly, I'm sick of looking at his ugly mug. heh. anyway, I did two versions, I like the second more even though it's weaker compositionally.
thanks for viewing. any ideas and comments are appreciated and welcomed.
Frank
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gArGOyLe^
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| Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 8:13 pm |
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lookitsfrank
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 1:45 pm |
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| bump. please? heh. |
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Icannon
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 4:23 pm |
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| The shading around the red makes those sections look beveled. i'd re-examine your reference and look closely at proportions, the shape of the head and the eye-ball area. |
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 7:36 am |
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I agree. The black lines on his skin look like they were carved into a red surface.
The lines don't have that symmetrical quality to them and it all looks a little "messy".
The shading on the eyes needs a little more attention IMO.
Tip: Post a smaller version with a link to the fullsize picture in case you really feel like showing it (many don't like the idea of posting full-size artwork online for safety reasons). |
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lookitsfrank
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| Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2002 2:11 pm |
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thanks for the comments. advice taken.
Frank |
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