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Krauze
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 Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 4:56 am |
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Lost Demon. scan+PS_5.5. Some of you have bashed me for using color dodge tool a bit too much. This time i tried to stay away from it. Cant say I succeeded 100% ..khm
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 9:30 am |
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hey... theres nothing wrong with using the dodge tool... its just how much you use it and where...
anyways.. so far I like the image.. but it doenst seem to me to be finished... Its a little too sketchy.. Im not sure if you meant the anatomy to be a bit off so Ill leave that alone. |
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 5:54 pm |
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He looks more like some gladiator than a deamon...His head/neck don't look like individual pieces..like a worm 
nice. However it does give the impression of being a small piece of a larger picture... |
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anomaly
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 1:25 pm |
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i really like the line work that you used on this image.. it's really expressive and gestural, and imo is quite effective...
one thing i would suggest is to creat a little more contrast between the demon and the backround on the shaded side... it seems to get a little bit lost in there... perhaps just lighten up the background on that side a bit... good stuff! |
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Krauze
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| Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 10:56 pm |
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Thanks for the feedback, guys
I`ll try to modify the background. and..sadly no - this is not a part of a larger image, lone sketch <:] |
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