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Freddio · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 9:45 pm

Hey sorry for posting this same image again... however I didnt want to drag up that old thread as I wanted to start off with a clean sheet

This is the finished version, I took into account some of previous crits.

Improvement?
imo yes..

[ January 11, 2002: Message edited by: Freddio ]

Shaded · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 10:36 pm

The mountains are nice...

Sort of looks like he's fluffing his hair out with that hand thing, though. Slightly..er...well, gay.

[Or have I just missed something obvious. Ag..I always do this shit...]

[ January 11, 2002: Message edited by: Shaded ]

Jason Manley · Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 11:00 pm

compare the size of his feet....

j

ftgjcf · member Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 184

i liked the colors of the original, but this is even better. i also like his boots and the fur on them.
actually, from what i can remeber this is generaly much better than the original. I really like the shading/ lightning on his left leg now.
you have some problems in his chest. and as jason pointed out: the boots are different is size.
Also the skin looks over lit in places (both arms and face)

Kari Christensen · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 8:09 am

I like the texture on the mountains and the face, but the pose and anatomy aren't working. I would like to see some new paintings in this direction with stronger figure drawing.

Saiger · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 8:14 am

I like the colors and the background but his pose doesn't strengthen his sexuality quite well, if you know what I mean

Otherwise good work.

micke · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 10:32 am

I agree. While the colours and shading it do look better, but still the pose and anatomy don't hold the picture together that well. It looks comic, but the way
you have made the picture suggest realism.

A good thing would be to plan out your picture better next time. Try out different poses and pick out the one that works best. The boots are way too big.

-Mikael

[ January 12, 2002: Message edited by: micke ]

[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

2 things from me: The sword's butt really concerns me, make it shorter and less dildo/mushroom-like please! also the leg in shade is too dark, cause i think in that environment the light would reflect from all over the place to light that leg (since it's foggy, there is less straigh sharp light, and more ambient)

Freddio · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 4:10 pm

thanks all very valid comments