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Morbid Guy
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 Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 3:45 pm |
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This is a page of something I'm working on at the moment. I'll post more later.
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 6:30 pm |
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very nice artwork. Be careful about the framing though. Watch your line weight (reduce it a bit) and balancing. Make sure both the outlines and the spaces between are spaced correctly and keep that uniform. At the moment the borders are dominating the image. The vertical lines are thicker then the horizontal and the spaces are uneven. It interfears with the asthetic of the page. Your drawings are beautiful and their frames are not doing them justice. It is very easy to correct but its as important as the rest of the images. - Hope that makes sence
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Cos
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| Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 10:12 am |
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| love the illustrative painting style with this bro, cool depature from some of your other works. Keen to see more. |
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Morbid Guy
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| Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 12:23 am |
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Shiro_tengu - Thanks very much for your comments on my artwork. Yeah, you were right about the panels, I didn't realise how sloppy they were, I had a try at fixing it.
Thanks for pointing it out. 
Cos- Cheers mate.
Here's another page of my cheery Christmas tale. :P
Have a very Merry Christmas everyone.
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