[Totuus]

C&C welcome

[ceenda]

Totuus: Nice work. I like the overall impression, but there are some things I think could be improved.

This is watercolour, right? If so, then remember that watercolour nearly always dries a lighter colour than you set down initially. I think you could do with some deeper shadow tones here. In particular, some cast shadow to really bring out the forms on the face, and the breasts could also do with better definition, though, in watercolour it can be a bit hard to do effectively. Also, with regard to anatomy, perhaps the neck is a bit long. Other than that, very nice indeed.

[ December 23, 2001: Message edited by: ceenda ]

[madmouth]

how lovely. there's really an atmosphere going on, which isn't easy to do. I agree with what ceenda said, and also the shoulders are not even, the left (my left) needs to be a bit higher. otherwise, just gorgeous