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klaivu
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Heya.
I have a little comic thing going. My first of anything of the kind, so - there will be lots to crit.
They lost something in the translation. I think. Watch out for stupid grammar too. These are the first two pages - there will be more ( since I have 11 days of holiday to spend, hooray ).
Page 1
Page 2
Putting up the finnish version too:
Page 1 ( finnish )
Page 2 ( finnish )
[ December 19, 2001: Message edited by: klaivu ] |
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hurricane
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 8:36 am |
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hahaahhaa, exellent !!!
ceep on doing it !!
more more ! 
/cane |
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Bilbo
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 9:46 am |
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Man this is awesome! i really like the general look and atmosphere, and some frames are nothing short of beautiful.. the only thing that bothered me so far is that some of the text is a bit hard to read (referring to the english version , naturaly) and this kinda blocks the flow on occasion.
there are many other minor flaws (anatomy/composition stuff) but i honestly think that it doesn't harm this in any way, perhaps even adds to its charm.
are you doing this as a personal project or do you have any other plans for it? how long is this story going to be? |
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DiXter
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 9:52 am |
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hihi, great stuff Klaivu!!
I love the secound one..
If you coloured it, it would kick even more ass..
Cheers.. |
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Lihamyrsky
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 11:10 am |
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| heheh. helvetin hienoa ty�t� =) |
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 11:15 am |
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| like i already said, i dig 'em quite a lot. |
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SolarC
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 3:12 am |
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| You should really get your work published. |
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Affected
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 7:37 am |
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Ha, loved it.
Did you snatch the carrot thing from Pyyn�? |
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 10:01 am |
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| excellent. these are really good.. really makes me wanna see the next pages.. |
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klaivu
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 9:18 pm |
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cane : thankee - I ( hopefully ) will.
bilbo : yeah, my handwriting is illegible. And with the tablet it's even more so. Anatomy / composition flaws that add to it's charm ? What exactly ?
Made this just for fun ..
dixter : thanks - the colouring would eat up too much time though ... i think ?
lihamyrsky : ( heh, i like that title ) kiitos jne.
faust :
solarc : umm.. i don't think i have enough stuff for that - have to make some more ...
affected : thanks. i got the idea from pyyno, yep.
awetopsy : thanks
Hmm. Now that i look at it, i think i should make the bunnies a little bit different. You really can't tell the difference between them. |
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