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Relentless Machine · Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2001 11:00 pm

Hi everyone!

Here is Dwarf Warrior. Please feel free to give me some feedback.

Seasons Greetings,

Ian

Relentless Machine · Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2001 10:50 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I was hoping to get a "comic book" feel to the image but maybe I fell short with the linework. Any pointers?

Ian

root88 · Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 12:36 am

I think it's cool. I could do without the black lines though.

n8 · Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 6:24 am

if you want it to have a more comicy feel you can try adding a thick outline to the character...I think if you do that it should add alot to the image

sweedberg · Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 4:52 pm

I thing it will look a lot better with varied thickness in the lines... But I like it already.

Dan · Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 6:11 pm

he feet are like twice the mass of his head. I know that its a fictional character with dwarf proportions, but it just feels too much for me

Fredrik Svensson · Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 2:02 pm

I really love the texture on the beard and the chainmail sleeve.

The black lines could do with some refinement, they look a bit sketchy right now, which is fine but doesnt go so well with the finished look of the rest of the piece..

A sharp highlight to the rivets on the shoes too perhaps?

Relentless Machine · Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 4:13 pm

Thanks for the feedback! I will try to tighten up the lines a bit and erase some of the construction lines that are still lurking around. I think that will help out. The image also lost alot when I converted it to 8-bit.

Thanks,

Ian

[ December 20, 2001: Message edited by: Relentless Machine ]