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Ztiev
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 Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 11:28 am |
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This is the prelim drawing for a painting. I'm going for a sexy but scary look. The sort of thing where you know she's literally a devil, and will drain your soul. But it seems like a fair price...
All C&C is greatly appreciated.
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Flum
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 1:23 pm |
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Nice!
The only thing that buggs me are that the wings dosnt seem to be attached to the body. It looks like they are floting behind her. Other than that she really looks like a sexy devil straight out of hell  |
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wisperman
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 2:13 pm |
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I agree. Its hard to imagine the anatomy of where the wings connect in here back muscle/skeletal structure. Would maybe her right wing be attached a little higher?
Just a thought.
But otherwise, great.
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Cos
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 3:05 pm |
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| I don't really like the legs too much, but the rest is lookin pretty good, like the style. |
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Highfive
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 4:47 pm |
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Her crazy eyes and her long, lean figure really show the look of a wild demon. But I don't think she's sexy, probably because she's not my type! 
Actually if there's anything I find sexy in that pic, it's definitely the eyes. And they are difficult to ignore!
Looks damn cool, though! I'd lengthen her arms a little to match the proportions of her legs and draw in some sort of joints to show how the wings are connected to her body before continuing. |
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KOryH
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 4:58 pm |
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I go for more of the voluptous type, or at least athletic, but, I really dig this pic. I look forward to seeing it colored. Anyway, here is my go at fixing some of the anatomy. I love the expression you have on the origional face, so disregard mine. I also didn't do anything about the wings.
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madmouth
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2001 5:04 pm |
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wow. excellent picture (the feet need a tad bit of tweaking though). she looks like michelle williams, with all fat and muscle sucked out. so that covers the scary. it does not seem that sexy, but probably is to a guy. goodbye  |
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Ztiev
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 12:04 am |
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GREAT comments! Very helpful, thanks.
KOryH: Thank you! That really illustrates some of the changes that would help this pic. You da MAN! |
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Conor O Kane
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| Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2001 9:33 am |
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| wow, brilliant wings! |
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