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Mindsiphon · Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 9:49 pm

I worked on this one for two nights. This is for a game I'm working on. It's a race portrait for a human female.

Pat · Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 11:04 pm

Hey, that looks cool. I'd make the underside of her nose a little darker though.

-Pat

Highfive · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:11 am

It looks very good. Her face is beautiful yet realisticly featured and the warm background suits her perfectly. I think she looks just a tiny bit like Kate Winset, but that's only an observation (in case you happened to hate Titantic).

Maybe you should touch up the pupil of the right eye so it sits in the irus more like the left.

[ November 30, 2001: Message edited by: Highfive ]

balistic · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 8:38 am

I dig it . . . especially the necklace.

ken · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 9:36 am

wow. now that is gorgeous. probably the most alluring elf i've ever seen. well done.

-Ken

egerie · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 12:24 am

:O simple yet efficient. I like that metal plates thingy (I'm sorry I left my vocabulary somewhere).. ! And the the hair have a nice volume.

ken : elf ? lol

Psycho Boy Jack · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 12:57 am

Wow, nice work! Very beautiful.

It's hard for me to tell, but are her breasts too high?

Mindsiphon · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 2:06 pm

Pat:
Thanks. Good obsevation. I may do just that.

Highfive:
When I asked the rest of the team about how the female portrait should look that's who they said it should sort of resemble. Thank's for pointing out about the eye. I didn't notice that.

balistic: Thanks I was having a tough time making the necklace look convincing.

ken: Thanks man. I suppose she could pass for an elf.

egerie: Thank you. Glad to hear it.

gseegert: Thanks. Now that I look at it you may be right about the breasts.

Cicinimo · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 2:31 pm

Nice! My favorite from you. Quite impressive!

quote:
Originally posted by ken:
wow. now that is gorgeous. probably the most alluring elf i've ever seen. well done.

-Ken

Some people are so clever

Anthony J · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 3:23 pm

nicely done
thats bout it

Ian Jones · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 1:29 am

Cool

I like it. Good work. The nose and mouth are a little teeny bit out of alignment with each other, but i geuss nobody is symmetrical anyway. I just wanted to point that out, because it looks as if you painted the nose and mouth at different angles... see it now? nothing major.

The necklace medallion thingy is pretty darn cool. It's form is really easy to see.

You may want to try increasing the contrast in those shadow areas ppl mentioned. Under the nose, under the chin?

Fix that little mistake of the wonky iris on her right eye. Try sharpening the details in that area too, since ppl always look at eye's carefully.

Hope that helps.

Malachi Maloney · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 1:46 am

Good stuff.
I'd like to see the rest of her.

Malachi

Mindsiphon · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 11:54 am

Cicinimo: Thanks

Anthony J: Thanks

Ian Jones: Thanks for the crits. Great observations and suggestions.

Malachi Maloney: Thanks man.

Ninja · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 2:04 pm

Very nice raist, 10/10.

My only nitpick is the ridges and her top lip, kinda makes the lip look at an offset.

sleestack · Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 6:47 pm

catnip: Thanks and

DiXter: Thanks man!

catnip · Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:19 am

she is beautiful.
but, did you know that woman started wearing
lipstick to "mimic" the ......lips.
(I think you can fill in the blank.)
if I were a man and saw these dark
"wormy" lips....can't say I'd find them
attractive. But, boy's don't really care
what they stick their.....into.
Only "men: care.

DiXter · Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:45 am

everything has already been said. So I'm just going to say
thats a great pic!