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CrubbyPunk
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 4:24 pm     Reply with quote
Hey guys, still trying to learn how to paint and do concepts. Here is my newist concept.

Cyborg chick
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 5:34 pm     Reply with quote
hmm.. the idea is good... but I think you need to work on anatomy and lighting the most. Dont get me wrong, I dont want to sound too critical, I like the image so far, but Id like to see a definite lightsource casting shadows and haze.. also the lower half of the body seems very under-developed.

anyways, for just starting out, your doing great.
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CrubbyPunk
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 10:08 am     Reply with quote
Thanks,
Yeah I need to work on a lot of things, mainly lighting. thanks for comenting
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Duracel
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 10:38 am     Reply with quote
hmm, first i thought Cyborg Chicken ... hmm, crazy idea, *take note*


@yours, i dont like the legs&feets, but the arms looks good especially 'her' left one
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corvax
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:43 pm     Reply with quote
I think you should give the legs a little more weight; the skinniness makes her look kind of fragile and unstable. (Of course, if this is what you're going for, then excellent). I agree about the lights, but it's definitely a great start. I'd love to see it when you've tweaked it - good work!
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