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Francis
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maceface
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 9:36 am |
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| pretty tight man...i love the loose feel to it! good job no crits from me |
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Cos
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 9:47 am |
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Hey cool piece francis, love the gritty palette you've used. cool shadows too.
Maybe if you crop a few inches off the bottom of the canvas it would look better, her body jst seems to blurge out which is a little off putting. Or sketch in some quick collar bone and shoulder lighting to show some kind of construction, and cast the below in shadow might look good. |
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 10:53 am |
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| Wow, you're getting better and better, I can almost feel the forms! |
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Manik Monkei
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 4:11 pm |
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ooh.
Your characters seem to be getting much looser and more alive. Definitely an improvement 
I'd agree with Cos on either cropping or defining her collar/shoulder area more.
Sorry I don't have anything more constructive to say. I like it |
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Quasar
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 7:40 pm |
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That's awsome man!!!  |
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ex
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 9:00 pm |
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| Niiiiiiice. |
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Superbug
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 10:00 pm |
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| This brought a smile to my face. |
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Steven Stahlberg
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2001 11:40 pm |
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Very nice, a sultry succubus!
Just a few things with the lighting and the perspective of certain parts of the face, like the horns. Also the naso-labial fold shouldn't merge with the corner of the mouth, I did an overpaint to show more clearly, hope you don't mind.
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nomad
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| Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2001 12:18 am |
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| Awesome as usual, good job on the lips & colour scheme. But yeah, Steven Stahlberg's overpaint of the curve between the nose & mouth looks more realistic. Kudos to you both. |
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Highfive
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| Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2001 6:41 am |
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Very wicked, Francis!
I agree with all the crits. Steve's crit is a very useful one to know!
She might look really evil if you added some red tinting or some similar effect to her eyes. |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2001 6:43 pm |
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| Oh mon, you be off da yayo with this pix. The girl is well drawn and the splash of color just so. Ed-- |
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egerie
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 12:40 am |
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This has a lot of movement and that's why I like it. I bet you doodled this while on the phone or something lol
As previously pointed out, the colours you chose are really interesting.
YUM |
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laslauk
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 1:53 pm |
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| Just beatiful, this is something I really like. I agree that the picture has a look and feel that this was pretty easy for you to make. I must go practising... |
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Magpie
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| Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:58 am |
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Wow Francis...I'm gettin' nervous,you're gettin' better and better.
Hi BTW. I hope you're well.
J to the R |
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