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Olve · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 2:32 pm

Illustrating some stories at the moment in my (formerly known as) spare time.
Have 10 days left and 3.5 story to go so this is nearly speed painting (about 45 mins each).
Here are a bunch from the first story. Hope you like them:

Olve

Morbid Guy · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 2:52 pm

Love these! Great loose, finished looking style. I assume they are for a childrens story, right? Hope u post some more when it's finnished. Good luck, getting them done in time.

Waldo · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 3:04 pm

Nice images and characters throughout.

A couple of quick comments would be that the symmetry of the girls face in the third image is somewhat off, particularly with the eyes. Faces are not symmetrical, but it seems a bit too off. Also the shadows on the snow work in images two and five colorwise, but not in images one and three (IMO). Blues in varying hues, but not grey/brown.

Nice work with nice descriptive characters, particularly in the last image. Would like to see the finished product if that is possible.

Good job.

Olve · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 3:37 pm

Oops, yes, you're right. Too stressed.

Well, it's fixed. To a degree. Please do refresh.

Thanks for the comment!

O.

[ December 04, 2001: Message edited by: Olve ]

Jezebel · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 4:00 pm

Oooh beautiful Olve... I'm such a fan!

the_monkey · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 4:58 pm

wow...the last one and the third one really work quite well

NeoFun · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 10:25 pm

Third one is amazing....

makotierra · Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2001 10:32 pm

Great stuff, gives off the winter mood greatly!