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Death Dealer · Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 4:03 pm

[ November 19, 2001: Message edited by: Death Dealer ]

Ysg · Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 4:34 pm

agh! someone step on it!
my only crit would be the legs on it's right side, it looks like all its right legs are back farther then its left ones. Otherwise the picture rocks.

Death Dealer · Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 9:17 pm

He is steping forward w the right, therefore the left are back further.

roundeye · Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 9:22 pm

nah, everythings proper. what do you do for a living? this is very refined stuff youre posting, what is it applied to?

Snorkles · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 1:54 am

Do you have a tutorial on how you do your work? Which program? Photoshop?

Dom Konijn · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 4:29 am

Well looks great, but I must agree on the 'legs thing'. Maybe you can show his right legs a bit more. Just my opinion. great picture nevertheless

Death Dealer · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 6:06 am

I work at Burger King now, but some day I hope to be an artist.

kheemo · junior member Member # Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 15

hehe ,, man You ARE an artist ! :P

nice piece.. very clean !

taff · member Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140

nice as always!

oscar · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 7:52 am

Oscar's rating: 8.5/10

Very clean! What's it for? Are you gonna colour it someday?

Robert Ashley · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 9:31 am

HaHAHA...you work at burger king!!! That is the funniest thing I heard yet.

Anyway seriously though...I would like to hear the answer to roundeyes question as well. I agree with him too...everything is proper, there is nothing wrong with the perspective and the legs.

Great work again as usual! Keep em comming...they inspire me!

taff · member Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140

eric, get another job! Burger King is not the job for you out there.

Or at least, sell your stuff to some tatoo-studio, at least in germny you can make quite some money with that!

Mime · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 4:06 pm

Great and ultra clean work as usual, i like the quality you put in such clean lines.
It is a good choice to not have pure black lines, it had sensibility to the thing I think

the only critic i have about this one is in the cast shadow
I dont really like your cast shadows that are just skewed versions of the silhouette, it kinda destroy some of the life and sensibility you have int he drawing. And it is not really accurate, for example in this one we shouldn't see any shadow casted from his horn thing, but we do, and with a top light like that the little parts of the legs, joining the 2 last sections, under them (hard to explain

) shouldnt show either in the shadow.

I think it would work much better if you took some more time to draw some simplified but accurate cast shadow.

Its the only thing that bothers me with your work, sorry if it sounded harsh

Duncan · Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 8:47 am

HEY! THAT LOOKS LIKE MY LITTLE ROOMMATES!!!

but seriously, this is a really cool drawing. are you going to pait it up? i am thinking of a metalic/iridescent hell-roach. or something...