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Terra
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 Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 9:25 am |
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This picture was based of a Neal Preston photograph circa 1975. What do you think?
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maceface
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| Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 9:34 am |
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you have the figure down right the only few things i can really point out is you could use more contrast add more darks to it...and use line weight to your advantage...on the bottom of curves and what not (any part that would look "heavy") use a thicker line. and the hair looks a tad flat...try to add some demension there! Add that and youll be surprised how much better your pic will look! all in all you have a nice picture going  |
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Flexible Elf
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| Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 5:19 pm |
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Excellent subject matter! Led Zeppelin owns me. Nice drawing, perhaps if you posted the reference ir'd be easier to crit.
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Gix
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| Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 5:32 pm |
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| It looks like the couch is white. If you listen to mace face, and get your work darker, you can add more detail to the couch, and it will still look white. (after re-reading what I just typed, I know it will be hard to understand, forgive me) |
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