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maceface · Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 9:07 pm

sat down tonight and started drawing...listened to fear factory and this is the out come. This is some merc hitman. His reflexes have been jacked up and he is now a perfect killing machine!
crits welcome...enjoy.

Rohan · Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 11:18 pm

I like it man, looks very Fear-factorish and even reminds me of the dude from Hitman: Codname 47.

Psionic · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 3:33 am

Awesome drawing, love the sockets and veins, nice detailing!

DiXter · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 4:05 am

one of the cooler things i've seen here in a long time..

You have to do a background and colour it!

wigin · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 7:35 am

Very cool... just minor anatomy problems.

1. How the head/neck is connected and twist. Get someone to model in the same position as this guy im pretty sure you wouldnt see that much of the right side of the face.. You could maybe fix this by twisting the torse a bit more and keep the head in the same position.

2. There is too much space between the hips and the rib cage. If you would make this guy stand up he would have an extremely long body. If this is the type of image where he is suppose to be a bit disproportionate than i have no crit. Other than nice rendering i would like to see some more.. Keep up the good work ..

maceface · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 7:59 am

true true wigin...yet remember that he has been operated on and had various things inserted and pulled out...im sure that would alter the anatomy...nah i do admit i screwed up a bit i did it in a few hours without any ref. only ref i had was a pic of an ar-15 rifle

and dix i plan on doing a background and hopefully if i get around to it...color it as well.

igino · member Member # Joined: 31 Oct 2001 Posts: 111

hey maceface! Awesome drawing! Fantastic shading! Love it!

... wait, you were listening to Fear Factory?!?

I'm always listening to FF when I try to draw/paint something weird!!! So I was listening to them from my early teens ... haha

igino

igino · member Member # Joined: 31 Oct 2001 Posts: 111

hey maceface! Awesome drawing! Fantastic shading! Love it!

... wait, you were listening to Fear Factory?!?

I'm always listening to FF when I try to draw/paint something weird!!! So I was listening to them from my early teens ... haha

igino

maceface · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 10:18 am

heh igino

yeah i listen to them alot...i have been drawing to them for about 4 years now...and since ilike to draw darker sort of cyberpunk stuff they totally fit it!
glad you like it

taff · member Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140

that a very nice drawing maceface.

great shading, does anyone know some good shading tutorials? I do not mean the theory or any light studies, just a plain and simple "how to hold the pencil for shading"-tutorial.

Does someone know one? I would appreciate it, if ypu guys tell me.

Defiant · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 11:02 am

Awesome attention to detail, but the fact that its very slightly out of perspective in places spoils the painting. Its such a shame. Getting the pose, proportions and perspective right are the first things you should focus on and then the details and shading come next. It helps to lesson the chances of fucking up. I hope I'm helping

maceface · Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 11:22 am

thanks for more comments!

t4fF-thanks...i wish i could lead you to a link for a tut...i dont know any though

defiant-yup your helping

you are totally right...and i agree with you 100% although i did this pretty fast last night without reference i should have taking the time to get some sort of refernce. this started out as a quick sketch to just get this idea out and onto paper...(this pic is for my character and object design class) so it was really just to get the concept out! but i see what you mean and thanks for the help!