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chronovogel junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Turku, Finland
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 11:50 am |
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Here's my first digital pic. I know I got lazy with the backdrop, so there's only a basic gradient. I didn't put much detail to the piece, bcoz I got bored with it after a while. Doesn't look exactly like GWB, but who cares. C&C are welcome.
reference pic
[ November 13, 2001: Message edited by: chronovogel ] |
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Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 11:52 am |
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the pose is good, but the browns and greens in the skin tone make him look undead |
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chronovogel junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Turku, Finland
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 3:36 pm |
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Vesuvius, you're quite right. He does sort of look undead, doesn't he? Maybe he really is... . Thanks for the comment. |
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Mr. T member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2001 Posts: 516 Location: Croatia
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 3:51 pm |
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his neck looks too wrinkled, like he's wearing a rubber mask. |
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chronovogel junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Turku, Finland
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 4:15 pm |
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Ok... I tried to soften the neck up a bit, and also reduce the effect of those green and brown tones which gave the undead look. Let me know if I worsened it or improved it. I appreciate any comments, since I'm just starting out.
[ November 11, 2001: Message edited by: chronovogel ] |
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geoman2k member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 375 Location: Indiana
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 5:50 pm |
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i like it overall... the second version fixed the neck, but it could still use some work. skintones look a little better but they need to be lightened up a bit too |
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chronovogel junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Turku, Finland
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 6:08 pm |
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Fair point, geoman2k , I guess it's just my style to use dark tones. However, I replaced the old pic with a new one with a little lighter tones. So check out the image above.
[ November 11, 2001: Message edited by: chronovogel ] |
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Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 6:27 pm |
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you're really making a lot of progress. I like it and it's very recognizable as G.W. Bush. (and yes, I do agree he probably is undead) |
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