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nova
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 9:40 am     Reply with quote
Ey guys .. Please rip this apart, if you would .. I did it pretty quick, like two hours after edits and things. I tried to not work from a sketch, just start painting highlights.
http://www.geocities.com/blackpixelss/art/digital/girlface.html

[ November 07, 2001: Message edited by: Nova ]
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Shaded
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Joined: 22 Oct 2000
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 9:44 am     Reply with quote
Nice, but I tug with big eyes at your sleeves for the proportional relationship between forehead and the rest of the face. Her eyes are slightly alien, too.

I love your work though. Id ask for you to update the site more often, but I know what that can be like.

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You know, I really like the way you render lips. Its...attractive.

[ November 07, 2001: Message edited by: Shaded ]
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Blitz
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Joined: 04 Oct 2000
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Location: Sedro-Woolley, WA

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 9:46 am     Reply with quote
Very lovely indeed.
nicely done here...

as a crit...hmm...i think her face is a tad Flat (not like colors or lighting) but as anatomy goes...I could be wrong...

Keep it goin
Im amazed at how good you are...trully.
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lel
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2001 1:17 pm     Reply with quote
More contrast would be nice, IMHO. The lightest light and darkest dark are pretty close. I used to get pictures like that (like watercolor), until I turned off pressure-sensitive opacity and tried. Took some time to get used to (felt like less control over what I did for a while), but everything is turning out more crisp now.

Nice look of the eyes, BTW.

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Muzman
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 10:01 am     Reply with quote
quote:
Originally posted by Shaded:
I tug with big eyes at your sleeves for the proportional relationship between forehead and the rest of the face


That has to be prize winning crit phrasing right there
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