Sijun Forums :: View topic - a while since last post.... here's a few sketches/paintings!

notic · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 1:56 pm

all these are just great pictures.
i really like the mood in the first picture

krobar · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 12:00 am

Really really impressive work!
don't why more people react on this...!

palladia mors · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 12:08 am

red planet

moustache contemplation

side of the wall

umm...plain scribble

any crits/comments would be nice.

pimento · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 12:08 am

Nice work. I really like the red planet piece and the swamp painting. The guy coming out of the water on the bottom reminds me of Maynard, the singer for Tool.

blunt3d · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 2:37 pm

awesome stuff.

palladia mors · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 11:25 am

thanks for the comments so far

I'd like to have more feedback, _constructive crits_ and so on.
there's always just a few replies saying 'good job' etc. regardless of whether I post crap or good stuff

then there's these dudes who post scanned lineart looking not-so-good and they get 20 replies:/
more comments!

....sorry, had to complain

pimento · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 11:59 am

I suggest giving figure in the "side of wall" piece some look space. The way it is now feels cramped and traps the eye. Also, the closest shoulder looks shorter than the far shoulder.

In the swamp pic, his left forearm kinda has a Popeye thing going on (it seems a bit thick.) His left hand also looks a bit wide to me.

Hope this helps. You've got a nice loose style. Keep it up!

[ November 01, 2001: Message edited by: pimento ]

Kool · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 1:24 pm

awesome stuff
especially the first one

keep up the great work