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poxen
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 Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:13 pm |
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yo
just bought the game GTA3. really funny! 
And...i painted this, the dude...
what do you think? whats wrong, whats good? tell me so i can improve!
here is a close upp
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edible snowman
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:17 pm |
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| you've gotten a lot better since i first saw your stuff. |
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Shaded
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:24 pm |
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| Well composed, but the necks too long. |
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balistic
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:25 pm |
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I like everything except the way you've cropped it at the bottom . . . I'd like to see his feet and firearm contact the ground, and maybe cast a shadow . . . right now, it looks cramped down there, like you "ran out of paper."
Otherwise though, very solid . . . there's a strong sense of character with him. |
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maceface
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:34 pm |
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agreed that this game is funny. you know if you let a hooker get into your car and you drive to an alley the car will start rocking back and forth! heh oh well this game rocks
and yes i like the pic |
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Highfive
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 5:15 pm |
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I like it. It's got a similar art-style to the covers of "100 Bullets", a real cool gangsta-style comic.
I think it does the job just the way it is, but any crits I have are just on the length of the neck and the strength of the shadow on his left cheek. The neck seems a little too long, but you might have done that deliberately to enhance the character. And the left cheek shadow might be real big sideburns. I can't tell what's in these days 
I heard GTA3 rocks. I'd buy a PS2 just for that game. |
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Cicinimo
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 7:05 pm |
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The style is slick. The way you ended it with the cropping just below the feet isnt. Thumbs up...
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maceface
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 10:33 pm |
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| well i have played the HELL out of that game and i am now on the final "level" the suberbs! and wow is it fun! |
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poxen
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| Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 10:43 pm |
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weeeha, a lot of comments, great!
edible snowman- thx, nice to hear that!
Shaded- thx, yea..notice it now...ah!
balistic- thx, you th�nk, i kinda like it...
but a shadow effect whould look cool to. thx!
maceface- yea love it! you can do that! ahh, i tried so hard to get her inside the car but no no...but i drove a trashed pickupp to.
 thx
Highfive- thx, 100 bullets, hmm...never heard of it, any site? no the neck is not deliberately changed, didn�t think about it. my usual mistake. and yes, GTA3 rules, buy ps2! thx!
Cicinimo- thx! "slick"!, nice expression..hehe a new word for me! thx
maceface-yea, its great!
[ October 30, 2001: Message edited by: poxen ] |
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