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Golongria · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 7:49 pm

Ok, here are my latest head studies. I was just trying to get the proportions down correctly.

and...

What do you think?
-Matteus Dorkus

/Edit Oh yeah, the pupils are supposed to be going in opposite directions, and it's DROOL darnit! DROOL!

[ October 30, 2001: Message edited by: Golongria ]

Golongria · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 10:13 am

--Bump--
Please respond, I need some real comments on these.

[ October 30, 2001: Message edited by: Golongria ]

Golongria · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 5:19 pm

--Bump--

Isric · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 6:24 pm

okay, the fact that you bumped these up and are begging for comments makes me not want to comment. But here I am anyway. Mostly just to say this:
If no one is commenting on your stuff, it is because it is boring and people don't care enough to stop and comment.
This said, how do you change that? By finishing off your images. You've taken the easy route by just leaving your images at the head. Lets take your crack boy, now if you leave it as is, it's a boring head with his eyes proped open, yay. Boy is he ever addicted to crack. At this point the viewer is finished and wants to move on. If you added a body, this would add a whole new dimension to the character, because then you'd have to show what the rest of him is doing, adding to the idea of the crack child. Then take it one step further and put him somewhere. Add a background, a crack house, a back alley, a space station, who cares, it will add to the image, make people interested, and THEN the comments will come.
Hope this helps

geoman2k · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 6:27 pm

isric: beautiful, just beautiful

btw your homepage's monthly bandwidth has been exceeded

Golongria · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 6:38 pm

Ok, sorry. I didn't mean to make anybody upset. I don't want to argue, but I've seen a lot of other people just post heads, I am just trying to work on them. If they bore you, ok. I hate it when people argue in these forums, so I'm not gonna.
Thanks for the reality check Isric.
Apologies for the "bumping."
-Matt

Hyperi0n · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 7:13 pm

bumping is ok if you ask me,anyone deserves some criticizm,and if they're not getting it,why not bump?

oh,and nice heads.
Which one of those is Vlad,better not be the top one because I was born in Romania..heheh

Golongria · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 7:39 pm

haha..nah, Vlad is the bottom one. Thanks

-Matt