[VENiM]

I got a little tired of workin on this one so i didn't add a background. I'd appreciate any comments and crits on the character though. thx

[MoleculeMan]

I really like the way that the hair came out. There are a few problems that i see. The thing under the nose (is it the cleft i am not sure) has been highlighted a little too much, so it looks like its poking out a little. All you have to do to fix that is make the colors on each side more consistant with the surrounding part of the face. Also the perspective/build of the hadn holding the sword is a little off. It looks a little too small. Also the way she is holding the sword should line up with the way the sword is going, it looks like the hand is holding it more to the left of the pic. The colorscheme of the boots is kind of out of place with the rest of her get up in my opinion, but Otherwise nice pic.

Keep drawing!

[johnnyp]

Very nice!

Yes, I agree with the comments that Molecule man made. Incidentally, the thing under the nose is called a philtrum (which translates from latin as love canal or channel...another useless fact I learned )

The only other thing I noticed is that the area between the bridge of the nose and the forehead doesn't seem to have a differnce in plane. Maybe this is how you intended the nose to be but I think it would look better if there was a shadow indicating a change in direction at the top of the nose. Just my opinion.

The hair.....kick ass!