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Author   Topic : "obese sausage eater shocks you out cold"
palladia mors
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 5:26 am     Reply with quote
he's yelling "wraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhh!!"
...tried to make it powerful and expressive.
seemed like a good choice to leave it sketchy here and there....but dunno. anyway the pic:

like it or not? hehe.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:55 am     Reply with quote
This is indeed cool, though I'm not sure it's getting the powerful edge you want. It kinda looks like instead of "wraaaaaghhh", he's going "Mum!! Oh no! I didn't mean to! Honest!" @;-)

Make him look angrier by scruntching up his nose a bit and upturning it slightly. Also make his eyes less circular and more diamond-ish, like he's squinting, but angry-like. Have his eyebrows pointing downwards towards his nose, aswell as wrinkles on his forehead. Of course, all of this is if you want him to look like he's gonna do the same thing to you as he's doing to the sausage @;-)

I want to fear him!!! *grins* Keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:10 pm     Reply with quote
nice textures and colors. Looks like wood stain over painted wood. How'd you get that?
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:45 pm     Reply with quote
I really like your colors . But I can't help think ghandi trying to break his fast.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
Definately like the colors and style.

I'd have to agree that the impression I got from the guy's face mimmicks that of when my mom walks in on me naked...

Definately make him more angry, creases on forehead, less round eyes, etc. And something with the mouth is more scared than angry...
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 11:46 pm     Reply with quote
thx for the crits&comments. yep, I agree that the character doesn't look angry at all...but I'm too sick and tired of this piece so I'm going to leave it this way and maybe call it "Waaargh bad sausage" from this time forward. ?
umm...the texture on the wall was made from a wing of a bird-like creature I made and good old scribble.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:05 am     Reply with quote
Nice background, I really like the texture on the wall, reminds me of the game Blood. Is it possible that it's suppose to warn us not to eat too much sausage? Because I'm sure this guy looks like he is having a heart attack..

Now, I think the sausage looks too hard, it almost seem like breadsticks. Secondly, I don't know why the sausages has blood coming out of them?
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:45 am     Reply with quote
I like the shading style. The character reminds me of the zombies from the game "Blood"
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