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Peon
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 5:37 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

Normally I would create a picture, add it to my gallery, and *hope* people may see it. But now I'm going to try and plug my pics for all they're worth . So thats the mini story behind this newbie here.

Anyway here is my latest picture.


Please respond with any comments you may have. Feel free to C&C too so I may learn somthing.

Also here is my second most recent illustration if you want a geeze.

Beanie girl.

Thanks,
Peon.

[ October 22, 2001: Message edited by: Peon ]
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smi
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Location: Biel/Bienne, Switzerland

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 6:23 am     Reply with quote
I find the color combinations are very good, especially from "Beanie Girl"! Some critics though:

The shading of the red hair makes it too shiny and look like plastic. Try another highlight color than white, perhaps a lighter red.

You should also give more attention to the background, this will make your images more attractive!

There something I noticed at "Beanie Girl". Why did you use two different shading techniques?

Anyway, cool pictures!

cu
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n8
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 8:21 am     Reply with quote
newbie ma ass Snoj..wot u doin round here again ya old fart?
c&c...prob wont listen to me nyway...but the shape of the face and the facial details look like theyve been drawn on different angles...just IMHO..just looks weirdoed..and and and...make some more shinies on the belt...specially the bukkle...and and..dood..that chik looks like you!...lol
...but one prob...you dun got tits...hehe..oh..and ive already seen that beenie chik...and im really tired...so ill just leave now..
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Peon
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 3:53 pm     Reply with quote
n8: Hehe you crack me up!
Lucky my old account still works. My member number is so low!

Smi: I'll keep your comments in mind for next time ^^. I actually wanted this piece to have a blury background. Actually, refence was used for the background from a car advertisement.
With Beanie girl, well I used different shading for the bg to sorta make it look from an animation. Also I don't think cell style would work well on a background like that. OR if you were talking about her clothes, I did different shading to make it look more like a woolie jumper.
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