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Fallen
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2001 11:27 pm     Reply with quote
My latest. C&C welcome as usual, but I'm pretty content with it the way it is....which is unusual for me.

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Lomi
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2001 11:29 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice composition and form, the pose is nice, however im having a hard time see her torso as a 3D object, it appears flat to me (im not talking about her boobs). Excellent job on the latex
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Jezebel
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2001 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
Nice =)

I don't mind the slight flatness of the torso at all... I sort of feel like that's where the "grace" lies.

I LOVE the wings on the wall behind her. It totally makes the piece for me.
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CyberLink
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 2:15 am     Reply with quote
That's a really nice piece but I would agree that the torso looks a bit flat. Anyway that looks beautiful :-)
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krobar
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 4:34 am     Reply with quote
Her breasts looks to flat, the rest is perfect
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HellSpawn
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 6:24 am     Reply with quote
Looks incredible. I love the shadow on the wall behind her. I like how the shadow looks like wings from an angel. Awesome work Fallen.

- Shawn
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Leo
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 6:24 am     Reply with quote
Cool. Good work with clothes as usual Fallen, I really like it, but your lady as many people noticed is 'flat'. I think you need to increase a color range for skintones. Also there is something wrong with her left hand...

-leo
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 9:12 am     Reply with quote
awsome fallen. see this is why you need to make prints. i would so buy one of this. the wing shadow is awsome. beautifull work!
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Quasar
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 10:05 am     Reply with quote
awsome pic man but her boobs are to small
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 12:50 pm     Reply with quote
Awesome... wow
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NextGen
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 12:55 pm     Reply with quote
i love your shinny leather ^_^
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Malachi Maloney
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 2:34 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work as usual brotha.
The shadow on the wall really adds to the piece. Nice touch.

Take it easy,
MDM

P.S.(I've got my first photo shoot with my own models this weekend. Hopfully everything will go well. Wish me luck. )
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goldnarmz
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 2:48 pm     Reply with quote
cool!
i thing the leather clothes was done very well!very sweet!
as for the lady she does look sexy and drawn very realistically!...just need to flesh her out abit
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ex
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 11:21 pm     Reply with quote
I'm not seeing this "flatness"...
and her boobs are not too small. *shakes head* jeez.

I like it alot, bravo. *kissface*
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 11:26 pm     Reply with quote
nevermind, i do see the "flatness" now, it's not really a big deal, i still like it just as much. I noticed the wing shadow like a minute ago.
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MrLuisDiaz
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 2:37 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work. It is funny the nudity in this picture doesn't give any sexual illusions while I wonder if she was covered would she be more sexy?
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JeffTheKing
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 10:19 pm     Reply with quote
very nice. As always the leather looks stunning with the lighting. Looks like a girl i saw at the Savage Garden bar on Queen street tonight. You probobly know it, or so i would guess considering most of your subjects look like they might fit in there.

I forgot to add... i think those wings work brilliantly with the hair, brings in a really nice balance with the figure and the shallow depth of the background.

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Fallen
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 11:43 pm     Reply with quote
Thanx all.

Lomi- Hmmm..I don't really see it that way. But thanx for the input anyway.

Jezebel-

CyberLink- Read above. And thanx.

krobar- They actually are. The model has unusual breasts. When she raises her arms straight up or up to the sides they prctically disappear. (but they're still very nice. ) I was going to 'augment' them in the painting, but I wanted to stay true to the subject and as I did it I felt it complimented the piece more than the typical 'big breast' pin-up.

shawncollette-Thanx. The shadowed wings were actually an after thought, but I dig them too.

Leo- The left hand gave me no end of hassle. Still a bit too fat i think. :\

roundeye- Hey dude. I am going to. I am actually in talks right now about having a gallery show here in Toronto. I'll let you know if and when it happens if you want to check it out.

Quasar- Nothin' wrong with small boobs.

ex- Thanx.

NextGen- Thankyou. I love doing it, it provides a challenge each and every piece. There's really no set way to do it, you sort of have to wing it each time.

Malachi Maloney- Lol...I just now realized you were cybertoker2000 cause your sig on another thread you signed CT2000 by mistake. Good luck with the models btw...I am having a bitch of a time finding new ones right now.

goldnarmz-

MrLuisDiaz- Interesting. There is always a toss up when I'm deciding on the models attire. SHould I go with exactly what they were wearing in the shoot? should i add to it? take some away? I usually like to keep a nice contrast between skin and pvc. In this case she had a full lenght pvc dress on which was pretty overbearing so I left her topless to contrast that.

JeffTheKing- Lol..Savage Garden...good god. I cannot go to that place anymore. I actually went a couple weeks ago with a friend of mine and was ready to leave about 5 minutes into it. Just not my scene anymore I guess. I don't think this model frequents there either but she does club on Queen St quite often.

Thanx again all.
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Malachi Maloney
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 12:30 am     Reply with quote
"Malachi Maloney- Lol...I just now realized you were cybertoker2000 cause your sig on another thread you signed CT2000 by mistake. Good luck with the models btw...I am having a bitch of a time finding new ones right now." -FALLEN

Yea, I thought I'd change to something more professional. It's no secret though, check out my sig.

Take it easy,
MDM (CT2001)
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 3:32 am     Reply with quote
This is my favorite so far. The silhouette of the skin is nicely designed so that it communicates the interior form just fine, at least to my eye. The only tone on the interior of the skin shape that contradicts is the cast shadow of the arms across the torso and breast. That could be used more to your advantage in showing the form of the torso. If you want graphic strength though, maybe play down the cast shadow.

Eh, you know what you are doin..
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