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Topic : "Hey! It's a bird !! An EVIL bird !!!!" |
Junior
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 Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2001 7:03 am |
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An kinda evil ostrichy bird (HB Pencil
sketch, colored with Paint Shop ) :
And in color :
C&C Welcome....
[ October 13, 2001: Message edited by: Junior ] |
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Junior
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 6:04 am |
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Isn't this suppoused to be a fourum where people give crits and comment?
If my work is not up to the standards, then I WILL stop posting, but seeing how people don't even bother to write anything is aggrevating !! |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 8:12 am |
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| I like the BW sketch, but the length of the left leg is bothering me. Definitely needs to be longer. The coloring is coming along, but I think it would look a lot better if you kept working at it rather than just laying down the solid colors. Shade it, highlight it, give it some depth. But aside from the length of that leg, the sketch is looking great. The varied line widths give it a professional look. |
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Jan F K�n�dy
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| Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2001 2:07 pm |
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Keep up the good work and create something more awesome which you would get more replies on. Just hang in there  |
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