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I just love it! I'm sorry but I don't find anything important to crit.

[Morgoth]

Beautiful, I like it! The table left white looks terrific in my opinion :)
I think you need to put a bit less atention to some of the objects, in order to get some depth. For instance, the man on the bar looks as if he's standing on the old man's shoulder. Why don't you try to fill him with thin strokes, to make him darker, for instance, thus pulling him back? :)

[Lukiaz]

Lookie lookie here..
C3P0 with breasts!! (fetish?)
This is cool man, alot of nice detail in there.
The foreground guy.....reminds me of a Klingon(sp), he wouldn't happen to be near the Starboard Bow?. heh
Is the other guy getting up or doing one of those "I'm staren ya out while posing all hard like"....?
If I was an art teacher then I'd comment and say "Why Cos what a brilliant example of contrast....you get sticker".
Sweet pic dude!.

[Cos]

Thanks for the comments peeps

Morgoth - I did plan to put stuff on the table. Drinks, guns, some kinda design to it. But then I didn't want to kill of the balance of black and white, soo that's something I was unsure about. Glad you liked the lazy option heh. Yeah I think you're right about the thinner lines.

Lukias - welll, I was aiming for that Lukias goldstar, but I guess the sticker gonna have to do. If it's a Lukias stamp of approval sticker, then I'ma still wear it with pride

[DiXter]

I don't relly know what to say...
It's really cool. I wish I could do stuff like that..

[V Shane]

Looks great, the only thing I would do, would be to do some thin diagonal lines over the background white areas in the back to pull / recede it further, and leave the foreground as is!

Great job, I personaly don't run across people too often who do good b/w...

Shane www.vshane.com

[Cos]

Did this pic quite a few months ago, then scrapped it as it wasn't really working out as I'd hoped. Anywayz, comes across it again today and thought I'd post it here to get some feedback.

[kos.mandis]

It looks really good, however you seem to have added some extra detail on the 2 blokes sitting on the table, that moves away from the clean and contrast look of the rest of the image.

Plus, that punk on the right looks familiar, is that u Cos?

Aaarrrrrr

[Cos]

Thanks again for the comments pplz =)

mandis - that slick badass on the right??? nah he's not me, but I can see how you can confuse that, being as we both some slick badass muddafukkaz heh

[ October 13, 2001: Message edited by: Cos ]