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saripol
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 8:18 am     Reply with quote
i did these while the forum was down





comments, crits, tips etc are always welcome
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Conor O Kane
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 9:10 am     Reply with quote
Your clouds are great.
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Axl
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 9:43 am     Reply with quote
I like the second more due to the simplicity ,it's easy to look at. I know you've stated that these are doodles but I think that the tower block could be a touch sharper as it's the focal point.
I like the first piece but it feels too cramped as it is and the perspective looks a little off also.
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saripol
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 4:38 am     Reply with quote
conor, thanks .

axl, i did a first but i seems wrong somehow it looked as it was part of the roof at the bottom... hmm may be i should've blur the roof instead.. i was trying to get some depth in.. hehhehe i dunno.. as for the first one.. i wasn't putting much tought about the perspective which i should..
anyway.. thanks..
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