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Poprocksz
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:13 pm     Reply with quote
Here is a comic hero i've had for years...
He is immortal....and he's a punk.....nuff said......i know theres alot of mess-ups......just let me know anyway...hahah



Check out my lame site
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Matt Elder
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
The image looks good and you certainly have a bit going on in it. I'm not sold however on the lower trunk from the armpit down. It seems the guy is bulked up here disproportionality to his upper body. Maybe it is meant to be a lose fitting shirt but it just looks a bit off. It also moulds too well to each row of abs and the top chest muscles. For mine, having the pinky finger stick out when the blade is facing the 'wrong' way in the right hand just doesn't seem right. It is probably my personal preference as I don't know whatever martial art it is that well. Overall a good image and keep at it.
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Poprocksz
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:22 am     Reply with quote
Yes the shirt is supposed to be baggy.....
But I see what you mean about the sword.....
I love the knife though....thanx
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*Mightypea
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 10:20 am     Reply with quote
dead kennedys!
w00p!
hehe, nice drawing, reminds me of the concepts for um...blabla "of steamworks and " blabla, i kinda forgot the title .
but it's a game, and it's a compliment too.
*m
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a_sh
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:16 pm     Reply with quote
nice image. i like the shading

agree with Matt Elder about the shirt.

there seems to be some inconcistense in the guys movement... the hair indicates a completely different direction of movement than the smoke from the cigarette. unless he uses tons of hairspray

hehe, is it just me or does he look like the mayor in spin city?
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Poprocksz
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:19 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah the shirt bothers me....maybe i'll bust out the eraser......the hair is off too....but it is supposed to be stiff....
and spikey....thanx people
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