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delovega2 junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 31 Location: canada
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Jabberwocky member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2000 Posts: 681 Location: Kansas
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 12:14 pm |
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Nice... I'm impressed! |
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Timski junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 26 Location: CA
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 6:58 pm |
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Hey, nice website. Well let's see if I can cover the drawings under "Art"-
Ivy ~ head too small, waist too big, nice coloring
Rogue ~ face is distorted, legs too long, sexy and nice coloring again
Psylocke ~ legs too long, yellow moon?
Mystique ~ greys are a bit dirty, nice pose and overall
Space Marine ~ much more dramatic shading on the armor, lose the grey scratches til you make a texture on the whole armor. nice fire
Soldier ~ head is MUCH too small, nice inking
Satan ~ nice mood, I like the monotone. work on the muscles and have less of the sinewy tendons
Teddy Bear ~ there is no shading, include some dark lines in the shading so that the face will not stand out so much. cute eyes
Portrait ~ eyebrows seem exaggerated, the hair has only a midtone and needs shading/highlights, breasts are low. try not to outline facial features as much
Lady Death ~ great effective coloring, work on the feet, legs are not comfortably crossed
Karii ~ nice coloring, her weight is not resting on her hand as you suggest so it looks like she will fall off the cliff (kinda)
Ghost in the Shell ~ stylized coloring of the glove does not fit in with the rest of the picture, legs are too wide. nice glows
Chun Li ~ too much muscle definition with the lines, the background needs more than gradients
Catwoman & Batman ~ catwoman's head is too small and she is about to fall over (the weight needs to rest on the left foot), Batman is a bit broad shouldered, I like the black and white inking
Voyagers ~ head MUCH too small, legs MUCH too big, needs highlights and a background
Voyagers (2) ~ head too small, awkward pose, unfinished
(whew) I was being kinda harsh, just saying what you can improve on. I like your art, wish I had more time to complement everything. The main thing that you need to work on is the human anatomy, mainly the lower body and head size. Check out books by Bruce Hogarth and Andrew Loomis (via download) if you can. You have the coloring down and you're on the way to cranking out some really great comics. |
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Jenn member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 9:12 pm |
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Nice.. just inregard to the rollovers... maybe a orange or something glassy looking when you roll over isntead of the grey would look nice
Your art is good.. you have the comicy style of chicks down pretty well.. [tho i only saw the thumbnails]
Cheers I look forward to seeing your art.. |
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Samson & Friends member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 106
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 11:43 pm |
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I hate sites that are near-impossible to navigate, that's why I like your one. It's simple navigation combined with an eye-pleasing design make it a pleasure to view.
So well done!  |
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[666]Flat member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2001 Posts: 1545 Location: FRANKFURT, Germany
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 12:03 am |
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HELLA NICE! |
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delovega2 junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 31 Location: canada
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 7:27 am |
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Ahoy, thanks for visiting my site... I appreciate everyone taking the time to view my stuff. I'll try to work on my technique and hopefully people keep coming.
thanks again,
~James
Delovega2 |
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