Sijun Forums :: View topic - meloncholy drawing of a meloncholy character

sweetpea · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 3:55 pm

it's good to see these forums back; i love lurking around here.

here's my latest picture, done for one of those goofy online anime contests. granted, my more realistic style creeped in a little more than i thought it did.. but anyway. onto the pic?

Icannon · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 4:13 pm

i like the textures. would her left hand not be in the water as well, considering it's touching the right arm all the way down to the surface?

Pat · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 1:27 am

I like the water. It looks good.

-Pat

Timski · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 4:27 pm

I like it. Not a lot to critique. Lineart is great, I don't see any problems there. The texture of the walls and the water fit in nicely with the cartoon style. My only crit would be more highlights on the girl's skin, especially if she's wet from that sexy bath. Great pic, I hope you win the goofy online anime contest.

roundeye · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 4:51 pm

icannon, it seems to cross the arm as opposed to follow it. theres a slight curve at the cross ove. a shadow under the crossing would help pronounce it more. the textures and lines are beautiful!