[Zaki]

Hello

Here my first post in this site.. This is my third try for draw and give colour with photoshop.
I usually work with software 3D and my skill for work 2D is limited for do textures and touch up any images. I�ll try better for the next time . All feedbacks are welcomes.
Excuse my english is awful.

[hamilton]

your english is fine.

your picture is too fuzzy. the subject in front should be very clean and sharp to contrast the foggy appearance of the background. this will bring the attention to her even though she is over the right. it's also just the way these things work. keep on tryin. this shows much potential.

[Zaki]

Thanks for your comment hamilton. Im agree with you. I�ll do for the next one

[Gordillo]

Welcome aboard "paisano"!
Nice start,only a thing...err..your pic looks a bit blurry for me but it's just an opinion

[Isric]

yeah, to avoid this in the future, don't use the airbrush. Use a hard edge brush and /maybe/ come in later to smooth a few things over. Cool concept too