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kohse
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 Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 9:13 pm |
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This is a charcter design I did back in 1999. It's a "Fallout Scout" for a comic that I had an idea for and is now finally being produced.
Crits welcomed. They will help when I do the redesign for the new book. |
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Eshara
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| Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 9:26 pm |
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Darken the outlines some more so I can see it better. 
Looks like a great picture. |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2001 9:29 pm |
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A total blur....
I don't know what to say. |
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soulnine
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 12:00 am |
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| the illustration it too bright, but not sure what caused it ... might be because of the drawing itself, or the scanning problem... its hard for us to analyse the illustration but it should help if u can make the image visible... it looks like a great piece of artwork to me anyway |
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Gordillo
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 2:09 am |
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| Cool!,very nice design. |
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kohse
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 7:19 am |
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Okay here it is a little bigger and a little darker.
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warbaby
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 7:29 am |
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| being a huge fan of pencil work, i gotta say i really like this pic. I like the light modeling on it, well simplified. |
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ichiban
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 7:31 am |
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| i really like the bulkiness of it...big giant arctic wear? well, fallout scout meaning maybe radiation suit? anyhoo my only crit is that i feel like there should be a bit of cloth coming out from under the facemask connected to the rest of the cloth covering the head...you know, kinda like a beecatcher mask dealy...to completely cover the neck area... |
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ichiban
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| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 7:34 am |
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| ...wait a second...the left arm's way too short. it's only a tiny bit longer than the extremely foreshortened right arm (his left + right, not ours)... |
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