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Oblagon · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 7:02 pm

the figure looks flat - i don't know how to paint cloth.

minister · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 7:13 pm

Nice pic! I love your style! The right arm looks a little long and the elbow in the left arm seems to be a little low. I love the floor in the picture! I look forward to more of your work!

Keto · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 10:34 pm

great style, gives out a nice mood.
i like his costume, one thing though i think his left leg/foot is raised to high, i think he looks kinda like he is running. even though some people walk like that i dont think that some one in a state where they have to carry a cane would walk so 'briskly' as to lift there leg up that high.

other that that it is awesome, i like the hat the most. Have you seen Marilyn Manson's music video 'Man that you Fear' ? the guy in the pic looks alot like his build and what marilynmanson is wearing during music video.

Oblagon · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 11:07 pm

thanks for comments. i think there's something casual in the way arm and legs are positioned. right arm is definitely too long. i'm not sure if the foot if too high, but there's something wrong with it too. i'll work on this pic later.

marlin manson video - nope. i was thinking of king diamond.

Collosimo · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 1:40 am

Nice. Interesting and very effective stlye you have. Your colour choices are a source of intrigue.

I think the problem with the foot is that it looks transparent. You need to vary the value and colour, so that it does not blend into the background. Also it sort of tlooks like that leg is knock kneed. The knee seems to point inwards a little bit too much. Very slight adjustment needed there.

This stuff reminds me of Spooge.

Cos · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 1:20 pm

I think the most obvious crit is his right arm is way too big... Also maybe if added some more canvas to zoom this out alittle, a ceiling and some more ground would add to the prespective and depth, maybe make it more interesting. I think the style this is painted in is really kool tho.

edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

i dont know about way too big for the right arm. it could be a little shorter, but maybe he has long arms. the main thing is making it the same length as the other one. im not sure if it is or not.

Superbug · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 5:26 pm

Sorry to be the first to say this, but it definetly has a spoogeish (that sounds gross)feel to it

right hand too big, like the colors though. quite yummy. sorry for not giving you technical crits, busy

Oblagon · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 10:17 pm

thanks. Mullins can do this a lot better. this wasn't too well thought out and should be in wip section.

(that wall annoys me)