[EviLToYLeT]

[edit]scroll down a bit more for the 2nd picture and comment on that. thanks![/edit]

C&C please... first image that I actually finished on the computer



[ August 07, 2001: Message edited by: EviLToYLeT ]

[Wiked Ewok]

Nice overall values. You might want to smoothen the changes in value, unless of course that's just the style of the piece. Cast shadows on the shirt and neck are nice. I don't know but I think the face needs a little more contrast to emphasize depth. Eyes might need highlights to show that they're eyes, even though the photo reference(if using one) doesn't have one. Still looks flat to me. Photo reference? Nice work!

[EviLToYLeT]

Thanks ewok.... I adjusted it around and stuff but realized most of the values are blotched and too mid tone.. but i give up on it. it's as final as its getting

[shahar2k]

overall the values arre pretty well done, the hair looks very flat anywhere below the eyes, you could change the outline adding some whisps of hair coming off to show that it's real, other than that...

the buttons on the shirt seem a bit scratched out in the last moment, but overall very good pic

[EviLToYLeT]

^ you go...

Anyway, I would really like it if someone was to tell me what I need to work on and how to remedy it so I can use that information for my next piece. Thanks in advance and to all who responded so far!

[Cyriss]

Hmm.. maybe try to use even more tones to reduce the blotchiness?

Good work tho especially for your first computer piece!!