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scarecrow
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 2:17 am     Reply with quote
Hello All, I'm new and intimidated. =) And dunno what to say for a first post.. besides cheezy things. I've got cold sweat just by typing and posting in this forum, lol. So, nuff said, here is my crappy work . She is Iiniranuena, original character.

Nice to meet you all btw, ... .

*runs for cover*

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avaj
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Location: norrkoping, sweden

PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 3:25 am     Reply with quote
Welcome to the board

I wont be too picky and go too deep into anatomy issues and stuff like that, the only thing that really bothers me is the neck that is too long and wide and her arms/shoulders that are really thin. I like the massive use of different colors, but you probably could add some more contrast, more defined highlights and shadows. I dont really like the background, but thats just my personal taste

Good work!
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Imhotep
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 3:41 am     Reply with quote
Woah, very cool!!! I love the background, it really makes it look very three dementional. I do agree with the above though, I'd make it a bit more thin. I dunno about cutting the hieght of her neck, it'd probably look pretty cool long. Anyway, great colors and awesome work!!!
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Brain
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 3:53 am     Reply with quote
Welcome Aussie! @:-)

For the right now, I'll just agree avaj, as I need sleep. But keep up the goodly work!
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scarecrow
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 4:05 am     Reply with quote
Thank you for the crits . Yes, I know the neck is overly-stretched, haha. And the shoulders and breasts are weird. I'm an anatomical disaster, lol.

I dont know if I can fix them without redoing the whole thing though, *sad*. Oh well, at least I can fix the nose .

Brain> Hello Queenslanderr! *waves from down south*
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