[saripol]

well since many of you like to do potrait (read: i like to do potrait) here's another one

[Radiater]

Wow Saripol,

That's very nicely done. I can see alot of improvements in this over some of the other work you're posted previously.

Two comments. First, I think if you used a color (like light yellow) on the scarf, the top of the head wouldn't glare so much.

Second, I also find the white in the back ground is too strong. Perhaps, some green or blue as relief would help your portrait to stand out better.

Take it easy,

Radiater.

[saripol]

radiater : thanks, i absolutely agree with you on the background thing cause i think the subject doesn't really stand out.. next time i should try and make it a little blurry and faded.. i think..

[Briareos]

Very nice, don't know what to say really, maybe get some deeper shadows? some darker areas? not sure, but the feel is nice. Good work.

[[wakestarr]]

Really clean! I like it very much!

I agree with Radiater that the white in the background is disturbing.. other than that, perhaps a little more detail and variation in the shadows.. but that would also jeopardy the cleaness, so never mind ;)

..wakestarr..

[ArtKeo]

Apa khabar? How long did it take you to paint this portrait? Where did you buy your Wacom graphire?


Thanks.

[saripol]

thanks everyone, i've just notice her left eye maybe i'll fix that later

artkeo: khabar baik, i think it took me around 4-5 hour on and off to paint that... I got my wacom at Imbi Plaza

[avaj]

Indeed a nice portrait!
Her nose is pretty big, but I guess it looks like that Her teeth bothers me a bit, they look too straight, its looks almost like its her lower teeth. You should tone down the background a bit and add some diffuse colors from the background onto her clothes.

Good job!