[polarFONTey]

c&c welcome. I am looking to color it myself and practice some Liquid! style techniques or to pass it on for someone else to color. We'll see..

Tripod Page

[Tiger Eaten]

Honestly. I clicked on this post with very low expectations. In fact my cursor was poised over the back button. Be careful how you entitle your works. I imagine quite a few people will skip this post because of it. (Of course there are always a few that are attracted as well...)

And thats too bad.

Its really quite good. I am a fan of b&w scenes. Some nice shadows, and great detail in places. I wish that you could have revealed the creature a bit more. You have chosen a difficult angle and pose for your figure. If he is human then I believe that his head is off center, as it currently appears to be joined to his right shoulder. You may wish to scale it down some as well. I quite like the body, adding a bit more grey to the legs might be an idea, as their fabric pattern is similar in some ways to the arm muscles. I had to check twice to be sure that he was wearing pants.

All in all, very fine work. I really like the broken pillar that you have in the background for some reason. Nice, simple style.

[BakaSan]

yeah, this is pretty cool. Some of the musculature looks a little odd, but i like the composition and contrast.

On a different note, you dont seem to be getting my emails.We need to talk. please email me

Duncan

[ August 04, 2001: Message edited by: BakaSan ]

[Laemtao]

I really agree with Tiger there. I passed up this thread afew times b4 i finally clicked on it.. You really want to put more thot on the titling of your threads.

This piece has soo much potential that the only thing i see that needs work is your characters anatomy. Actually.. your anatomy needs ALOT of work.

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