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redbutted ape · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 2:36 pm

Need an Orc maker? I need a job.

Bilbo · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 2:59 pm

Looks pretty good, especially the face.
he could use some body hair to make him look more menacing. those hands and fingers are quite gentle, too- try giving him larger knuckles.

CapnPyro · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 3:02 pm

very cool! his accessories seem a bit haphazard, but overall that guys really really cool!

Bishop_Six · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 4:39 pm

His nipples should be less centered. If you move them out a bit, it'll look much better in my opinion.

dead · member Member # Joined: 18 Feb 2001 Posts: 489

It's prety nice, I'd say his legs are a little short though...

then again, maybe not. I don't know my proportions either.

[ August 03, 2001: Message edited by: GreenPeach ]

Shirotsugh · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 8:08 pm

Looks good, but what's up with those protruding bone/muscles in his legs? They don't look right at all. Also, the skintone seems a little bit too green for a wild, dirty beast; maybe a pea-green would work better.

Laemtao · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 2:33 am

Orcs? Need Job? hey... U tried applying to BLizzard? they do ORcs.. Lots of Orcs.

I like this model. the biceps seems kinda dangly, need to tighten those bad boys up. Those thighs could be bulkier, and GreenPeach had a point there about extending his legs. And i think the green is fine.. U can check Blizz's Orcs.

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Mo

Ragnarok · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 4:08 am

I think it's very well done, but I'll add details to the boots, they're pretty plain right now.
And maybe try what greenpeach is saying

NukleoN · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 7:04 am

Hey man good work! You should apply at Blizzard..they're pretty neat.

Maybe you could get in as an intern?

Fix that cloth belt, spread the nips farther apart and fix the bracers (make em substantial and cooler). <ducks>

Nukie

[ August 04, 2001: Message edited by: NukleoN ]

redbutted ape · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 1:06 pm

Hey, thanks guys... very funny "Nukleon". Ha, ha.... If there was anything I learned from making this (my first real 3D character), it's that you don't skimp on the clothes because people notice. Keep the crits coming because I've already pulled the textures off and am remodeling. I need all the feedback I can get. So far, it's make better clothes, much more diverse texture and better nipples. I'm really concentrating on the nipples. My grandfather always said that nothing makes a 3D piece like a nicely rendered set of nipples.