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VENiM junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Jan 2001 Posts: 46
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 9:42 am |
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Apparently this started off as a portrait of Tom Cruise. After i finished the outline of the head though i scrapped the reference because making the portrait exactly the same as the reference got really tedious. anyways, i'm not sure if it still looks like Tom Cruise anymore but there it is. Comments and crits are welcome. This is the second digital piece of art that i have ever 'finished'. |
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jamonch member
Member # Joined: 02 Sep 2000 Posts: 51 Location: Miami, FL, USA
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 4:13 pm |
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Chron,
The attention to detail in the hair strands and 5'o clock shadow are really nice, however that attention seems to get lost in other places such as wrinkles in the skin (forehead and under/around eyes), shirt, etc.. Also, skintone seems a bit red-ish in color.
To answer your doubts, in my opinion I see a little Cruise in the eyes and mouth area.
For your 2nd pic, I think it's pretty good. Keep up the good work.
jam |
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Wyatt Turner member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 501 Location: Everett, WA, USA
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 4:30 pm |
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Looks great for your second piece.. keep messing around and you will get even better. For my first time I wish mine turned out that good. |
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VENiM junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Jan 2001 Posts: 46
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 4:43 pm |
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thx a lot for the input. the face wasn't supposed to be deep red like that. for some reason it looked perfectly fine in photoshop but when i loaded it up into internet explorer the colours got all screwed up. is anyone else having the same problem? plus, i personally think that the picture lacks a bit of depth... could someone tell me what i could do it improve it a bit in this aspect? |
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Poprocksz member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2001 Posts: 497 Location: Transylvania
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 3:19 am |
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The nose...thats all thats weird...the nose..
Maybe have it point down more...
Do you have a reference pic?
Or was it a live one? |
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cybertoker2001 member
Member # Joined: 13 Jun 2001 Posts: 276 Location: Arizona
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 3:32 am |
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Holy bat-nose bat-man!
Sorry...I have nothing intelligent to add but, welcom!
Take it easy,
CT2001 |
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