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DiXter · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 2:40 pm

I had a total lack of insperation today so i just worked on a old sketch i did a couple of months ago.

The original res is something like 1500x 3000.

A detail...

Dude · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 144

Wow, impressive, she has quite a massive right hand though

[ July 31, 2001: Message edited by: Dude ]

Tiger Eaten · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 2:59 pm

Very nice work. I would have to say that I believe that knife steals the show. It has a solid, heavy metal feel to it that is perfect. Excellent rendering job. I also quite like those bubbles you have next to her leg, a small but nice bit of detailing.

If you are looking for some feedback here's what comes to mind:

The muscles and the breasts seem to me to be in conflict with each other, they are like this huge island of femininity surrounded by what appears to be mostly male body. Did you set out to draw a female or did she become one halfway through your work?

The liquid that she is in appears to slope up to meet her body as it ripples around her.

The (VERY NICE!) severed head is in the process of dripping blood yet none appears on the surface of the liquid she is standing in. Might be a nice chance to add some color to the bottom right hand side.

All together its a very nice picture. Your trees in the back add nice depth. Great work!

Lapjos · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 3:16 pm

HAHAHA somehow I think this picture is very funny. Looks like he or she had a plastic operation in which the plastic surgeon made some very slightly mistakes...and now he or she plastic operated the plastic surgeon

Don't think this was your intention, was it?

DiXter · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 3:19 pm

Dude: Thanks..

And i know about the hand i wanted her to have very massive hands.

TigerEaten: Thanks, appreciate it!!

I know the muscles and the breast doesn't really fit together that well. But i did my best..

And I wanted her to have unatural large hands.. i might make her left hand a bit bigger to illustrate it better.
And the idea you had about the blood in the water was something i was planning to do, but somehow i totally forgot about it ..
Thanks for enlightment...

and the crits.

DiXter · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 4:25 am

Lapjos:

I made some minor changes..

cybertoker2001 · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 4:59 am

Her abs really bother me.

I like the knife.

Both sides of the coin.

Take it easy,
CT2001

[ August 01, 2001: Message edited by: cybertoker2001 ]

cybertoker2001 · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 5:03 am

OH!

One question though...................
Why is there no blood on the knife? Is it not the kife used to sever the head?

DiXter · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 5:30 am

CT2001: yeah.. I have had some problems with her muscles.. but im tired of this pic now so i don't think i will do any more changes to it.
Anyway shes a demon not a human.

And I've tryed to do blood on the blade but it didn't look good. And It took away that nice and shiny feeling of the knife.
Besides.. the head looks more ripped of then cut of.

Thanks for the comment..

simuartist · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 8:57 am

Thats cool!!!