[canistr]

i really like the guy and the gun. you have got some real skill. i'd love to see a page full of people drawn by you.

[Jimbo Jones]

Hey, this is great! You express your ideas very cleanly, but with high detail...good qualities in concept artwork. One crit, however...I think the aircraft has some perspective problems. The wing on the right looks shorter than the other one, like it doesn't join the tail in the same place. Good stuff all around, though. I agree with canistr, I'd like to see more!

[jamonch]

Just throwing out some ideas on paper. You might recognize the gun from another thread These are lightly sketched, then inked with a regular ball-point pen.

Feel free to comment/critique.



jam

[jamonch]

Hey Canistr/Jimbo,

Thanks for the replies and critiques!

Jimbo, yeah, I agree. My problem with the ship was that I got lazy and didn't draw perspective lines for it. I just drew it out freehand (which isn't necessary a good thing). Ok, enough excuses from me

I'll try to post more as time permits. Also, you can check out this web page I have setup. There's some of my art on there. Also, the site is hosted by Fortunecity, so it might be a little slow.

jam