[Gordillo]

Here�s a new light study,forget the anatomy and the design of the weapon .Your feedback is welcome (as usual)

[wolf]

I like the lights and sun refflects! Perfect...the anatomy of the face looks strange

[simuartist]

Great lighting study G. The facial anatomy looks fine to me. The eyes are a little more crisp then the rest of the face.. but it all seems to be there perportionaly I wish I could see some new stuff that you have taken time to do. Your an excellent painter but yo always post quick studies...anyways keep up the good work!

[edit] Gordillo taking another look at the face ...you did the same with with the eye that I did with enalya's repaint ...I put to much white space under the pupil giving it a bulging look...but other then that the painting is awsome....hate to be picky about such a good study

[ July 27, 2001: Message edited by: simuartist ]

[Isric]

ditto on the lighting, very nice

[Awetopsy]

oooh purdy light reflections.. good job on those.. but yeah.. the face needs help..

keep em coming.. I like.

[Steven Stahlberg]

I was so inspired by your atmospheric image I couldn't help doing an overpaint, hope you dont't mind. Just a few minor things -
First I don't think the sun should be darker than the highlights. Then I gave her some bounce light in the face, and put part of the gun in shadow (from her head/shoulders). Widened the highlight on the shoulder, put the upper arm more in shadow... that's about it. (Oh, and I think you should straighten her head a bit, and move her left lower-arm up, shortening the upper arm.)

[Gordillo]

I�m agree with your suggestions,the anatomy sucks,and his face looks flat and a bit out of perspective.

Wolf- Thanks!

Simuartist- You�re right

Isric- Thanks!Glad you like it.

Awetopsy- Thanks!

Steven- Thanks a lot for your awesome redraw.I�m absolutelly agree with your coments about the light and the anatomy