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Democritus · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:13 am

Eh. Well. Me again.

This was something I worked on yesterday evening and a little today. I would say it's done but I feel some of you will notice and (hopefully) point out some things to further improve it.

about 186kbytes (too big, i know)

It's titled Orion's Emerald (who would have tought

). So eh.

Any comments and critique? I'm trying to learn something here

edit: eh. url was wrong

[ July 24, 2001: Message edited by: Democritus ]

MoleculeMan · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 12:55 pm

The forehead is too large i think. That, and the edges on the face could be smoother. They seem a little uneven. Nice job otherwise though!

Democritus · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 5:02 am

thanks for the input.

I also heard that the contrast on the face was too low. I will go ahead and work some more on it if I find time to.

Especially the forehead and the hair need work. Gosh. I hate it when I am happy with a picture, then people point out something and suddenly everything seems wrong

Just kidding. After all I'm asking for input. And I'm always happy to get some.

thanks again.

[ July 25, 2001: Message edited by: Democritus ]