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Jucas · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 10:25 pm

Just some stuff I did. I'm not on my knees begging for feedback

, but as always I love crits and comments. So if you have a minute tell me what you think.
My crits:
The major problem I see, is the fact that the light values and dark values don't contrast enough. And the sketches don't look finished to me, albeit I won't develop them unless I color them digitally.

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Jucas · Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 10:40 am

Is it that my pictures suck, or is it that they aren't naked ladies, elves or cyborgs... ^bump

Vgta · Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 10:56 am

Great title btw.
Okay the bottom two are better than the top ones. The anatomy on the cat/cougar/panther is off, drawing animals can be a bitch and a half.
I'd suggest trying to paint the bottom two and reworking the top ones.
Oh and what in the world happened between you and that girl????

Jucas · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 7:46 am

Maybe I could get a few more comments?

'Nectarine- · member Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2001 Posts: 50

or is it that these "showing-a-little-pussy" jokes are slowly getting old?

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*Rachel*

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Albert · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 8:18 am

I'm new to 4rtworx0rz, so maybe my comment is a bit rudimentary. But your head proportion seems wrong. The top of the eyes should be half way between the bottom and top of the head, the bottom of the nose should be in between the eyes and the bottom of the head, and the lower lip should be half way between the bottom of the nose and the chin.

I'm not sure if I'm all that right, so correct me; I'm new myself. =)

Jucas · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:30 pm

Thanks for the comments...
Vgta- Yeah, something was bugging the bloody hell outta me in that cat! Oh well! I actually like the top ones more than the bottom ones, heh

I will post an update in my other post "Enigma of Women"

Nectarine- Ummm... yeah. I am sorry... jeez. Why don't you go give some constructive feedback on one of those naked chick pictures.

Albert- Which are you refering to? In the top right one I wasn't going for realism. And in the other two portraits I don't see what you mean. In the old lady her head fades into nothing, and the farmer type guy is wearing a hat... So I don't know what you mean...

Freddio · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:31 pm

wow..

yopu've got an idea there

I like the use of coloured paper that very cool..

good work with the little pussy although there a few things a little out of whak with it

keep up the good work..

cybertoker2001 · Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 10:42 pm

No snach?

Damn.