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palladia mors
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Joined: 08 Apr 2001
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Location: Oulu, Fin
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 1:34 am     Reply with quote
I'm desperate for feedback, COMMENT and/or smite it down with the glinting sword of CRITIQUE!!!


[ July 23, 2001: Message edited by: palladia mors ]
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kimzoll
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Location: copenhagen , denmark
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 2:14 am     Reply with quote
Hi did you make it from alive model, picture or out of your own imagination?
Kim
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herbie
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Joined: 26 May 2001
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Location: Hilversum,Holland
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 3:46 am     Reply with quote
kinda reminds me of the mona lisa..
nice dark picture, i like it
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palladia mors
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 12:28 am     Reply with quote
wow, this got buried fast....
it's mostly imagination... I tried to
paint someone from memory, but it turned out to look a lot different than it should've come out.
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]Aratex[
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Joined: 19 Oct 2000
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
Hmm... Kinda sucks that this one got ignored, I like it a lot.. My only crit is that her eyes seem a bit off.. I'm not sure which one is in the correct perspective, but they don't match, so one of them must be wrong..
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thedaemon
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 2:01 pm     Reply with quote
I agree that her eyes are off. Try flipping it horizontally and seeing it from that perspective. It usually helps me correct the overal form of my artwork.
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