[proximo]

Hey yall, anyhow this is another quick pic, i had the line in my sketch book and i thought i would shade it today, i know it has some probs with the hands and stuff like that but i just felt like doing somthing with it. It took about 30 min on the shadeing its kind of quick but ohh well it was fun anyhow hope you like.

[Democritus]

Okay. firstoff those are crits, meant to help you.

Ill be quick and maybe a bit harsh, so please don't be offendended. They are also just my opinion and of course, might be wrong. Feel free to disagree with them

The proportions are wrong. I fear.

The head seems to big.
The arms appear to thin.
And I feel the hands are pretty small too.
Oh and i somehow have the impression that the whole neck is too long.

Just what I tought of seeing it.

[proximo]

Thanks, indeed i know things are off, this was more of a messing around thing. The picture that it was based off of was in a mag, she was one of them too skinny model chicks who done eat anyhow thanks for the comments and no offence taken ..