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Author   Topic : "First Post- Portrait of a Man"
Bibbit
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 6:25 pm     Reply with quote
This post is a piece of art for my website, where we have many portraits. I am a beginner, very much so, but I try. This is my second completed portrait since I bought my wacom. I mainly used Painter Classic, but also did work in PS and PSP.

I would love any feedback. I cannot seem to figure out shadows. Drawing what I see is always foremost in my mind, but it doesn't turn out right when I try to execute.

Flaws: lighting isn't quite right; head is too short; one eye is shaped a little different; etc. etc.

I am going for realistic, but I think it's too early to hope for that.



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At any rate, many of you on this forum inspire me to paint.
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MoleculeMan
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 6:35 pm     Reply with quote
Well you are accurate in your flaws you have diagnosed. If you see em, try and fix them!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 7:05 pm     Reply with quote
"Flaws: lighting isn't quite right; head is too short; one eye is shaped a little different; etc. etc" = Work In Progress Section
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