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Zorglub · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 1:39 pm

Here's something I did; I need comments on how to improve.

and heres's something I did on the cowboy theme

Gotta go practice some more now.

[ July 23, 2001: Message edited by: Zorglub ]

Freddio · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:00 pm

wow they are pretty cool..

not much I can really see to crit..

Id like to see more contrast in the colours

nice work

Ken McCracken · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:14 pm

Nice structure to the faces, but still way too fuzzy for my taste.

Zorglub · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:28 pm

Freddio: Thanks man. It means a lot to me. More contrast..gotcha

Ken McCracken: Thanks. Yes it's too fuzzy for my taste as well

It's just because I'm kinda insecure and always think I'll screw up so it's a way of covering my mistakes. I know it's wrong, but I'm pretty new to this stuff

Now I have to work on making the colors look more natural and using less brushstrokes. Any suggestions on how to achieve that?

thedaemon · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:43 pm

Colors are fine, and wonderful. Now it is time to do detail. You have great compositions, now comes the hardest part. Detailing it. Go for it, I wanna see it when you get done.

MoleculeMan · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 7:18 pm

I agree mostly. there is a lot of potential, it just seems like you had a photograph (well almost) and you went over it lightly with the blur brush on photoshop. Just sharpen the detail, thats all.

Zorglub · Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 5:59 am

Lucien: Thanks. I'm glad you like te colors because it takes me a lot of time to pick the right ones considering I'm slightly colorblind

MoleculeMan: Thanks for the tip. Yes everyone seems to think more detail is in order so that's the next thing on my list.